writing the wrongs (project 6)

  1.  exam:

address:

  • paardenbloemweg 101
  • 1942FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

  • PO Box 2812
  • London
  • W1A 5LN
  • Great Britain

 

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Nina Haak. Once I called with my Best Friend she has been living in Britain sins 5 years. She said to me that I had to read your magazine. I bought one and I love it. In the magazine I have is a quest, that we need to describe our dream journey. There is only one problem I do not live in Britain. So my question is can I join while I live in The Netherlands.

I want to go to Hollywood so bad because I want to meet famous people. Of course I want my Best Friend to join me because I love her and she said I need to read this. Maybe I can send my story in with email because that is faster.

I like to hear from you trough email.

Greetings Nina Haak.

 

2. exam:

address:

  • paardenbloemweg 101
  • 1942FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

  • The Sunday Independent
  • 90 Middle Abbey Street
  • Dublin 1
  • Ireland

 

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am Nina a 15 years old girl,  I live in The Netherlands, Amsterdam. With school we read a few off articles, I read one from your magazine. That article was about alcohol and 16-year-old people.

I am going out very oft. I like it but there is one thing that stops me. With al the alcohol some kids can get very aggressive and violent. That is why I like the article so much. I think it is good that are doing things against it. But it is too bad that some people have a look thought the fingers ( They do nothing about it.) In the Netherlands kids under 16 are not allowed to drink alcohol.

I hope my letter will be in the newspaper.

Greetings Nina Haak.

 

3. love letter:

address:

  • paardenbloemweg 101
  • 1942FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

  • boterbloemlaan 53
  • 5436FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

Dear Toine,

I am so happy that we met at the hockey club. Sins that moment my thought are in the air. Now I finally can call you mine. Now my question: would you like to go on vacation with me?

I have found a site were we maybe can rent a little Holiday home. Where is a jacuzzi include. I think that this is the best opportunity tho know each other even better and to spent some one time. I miss you so much because we are both having a hard time with school and can not see each other oft. I love you.

I hope you like it and I want to be your girl for a long time.

A lot off kisses Nina

 

4. Letter for classmate:

address:

  • paardenbloemweg 101
  • 1942FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

  • madeliefjes straat 6
  • 6236KL Haarlem
  • The Netherlands

 

Dear Sander,

At first my first impression of the site is clean, organized but a little bit simple. I like the subject that are on your site and you can see very quick that you take the Assignments serious. That is good to see.

One thing I noticed is that in the projects there are a lot of spaces between the sentences, that looks a little bit weird. Maybe you can do something with that. (I know word press sometimes looks like an alien and don’t want to do want you  want but I hope you succeed).

I like your site a lot and I will recommend it to a lot of people.

greetings Nina.

Link to site: https://sanderssuperblog.wordpress.com/

 

5. Letter for classmate:

address:

  • paardenbloemweg 101
  • 1942FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

  • tulpen kwartier 1
  • 5445SN Zaandam
  • The Netherlands

 

dear kaylee,

I love your site, it has an adult and clean appearance. A good use of grammar and long texts. It is neat. 

The only thing I think is that there are not that many photos and pictures on your site. That makes the reading a bit boring. When you use a lot of pictures the story or article can be a bit more clear. So my tip for you is to use more photos.

I am a bit jealous at your site.

Greetings Nina.

link: kaylee1102.wordpress.com

6. Critical letter:

address:

  • paardenbloemweg 101
  • 1942FZ Amsterdam
  • The Netherlands

 

  • adelaarstraat 02A
  • 9747RF Heemsteden
  • The Netherlands

 

dear Sir/ Madam,

I recently bought one of your new products. To be precise I bought the curler. I used it for the first time and it did not even turned on, when I tried it again it did turn on but then something horrible happened. It burned my hair of! I am super disappointed and angry. I never going to use it again.

There are a few thing I want from you now, a cheque for the hairsalon and I want to get An other product from you that does work. If not I will never buy something from your shop and I will gif you a bad name.

I expect a mail from you,

greetings Nina